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Well!

Yo dawg dis shit be bangin'. No, for real, I didn't expect to find this when I was just surfing through the portal for metal. Reminds me of Japanese metal and it has a very Japanese feel to it. I'm not saying that the Japanese language sounds like Swedish, no, not in the least, only a total fucking idiot would say that.

Despite really liking it, I thought that there was some strange quality about the way you mixed your vocals. Perhaps they need more bass? I'm not sure.

It'd be chill to collab sometime. (you can ignore the sound of my current entries, I have a new mic)

Schleif responds:

thanks a lot man! haha japanese, eh? can't say i know anything about japanese metal, but that's pretty cool i guess haha. yeah, the mixing isn't exactly flawless.. i'll try to work a bit with the bass in the future. thanks again dude, much appreciated!

Geil! Aber...

The quality is pretty bad. Keep tryin'.

Good

But not quite fantastic- You need to add a bowed bass section and maybe a quiet counter melody because this shit sounds hollow as a muthafucka. It also sounded a bit too much like a metal song to me, but it struck me that it would be fantastic if you added an electric guitar in that sounds similar to the music in Last Remnant or Super Smash Bros Brawl.

What I know for sure is that it NEEDS more fullness. If it weren't for the fullness issue I'd have given it a 9 out of 10.

Here's the thing

Being smart and taking on a battle like you are on the field with some muthafuckin' real soldiers is what I did here. I used strategy and behind the back style lyrics, I went on defense and on offense while Self just tried to attack with some shit he don't even know about, which I said in the rhyme but apparently people are too dumb to understand. Trying to be the most ingenious and most unique rapper is what rapping is all about, we're supposed to be poets while Self just tryin' to play like he a thug that dropped out of 3rd grade. It's people like that what give rappers a bad name. I've been rapping for years now and I've never had a battle where the other guy was so stupid he didn't understand anything I said. Fast rapping ain't about the other guy comprehending you, it's about getting more words into a small amount of time and y'all know that we didn't have very much time to do our parts.

Oh yeah and Self... I called myself a faggot in my second verse so seriously, where the fuck's your brain at? Maybe if you used it you'd get my words and if my words fly fast then why don't you just listen faster?

To wrap it up, I'm chill with losing. It just shows me that people are still stuck in the stone age and don't want to hear ingenuity when someone speaks. I'm not going to dumb down my rhymes to "win" a contest, but I did have fun and hope that Self actually starts going back to school some day.

Had to listen again

I saw the flash you put this in a long while back (great shit btw) and I just had to come hear it again. You should get some people to try and do tributes of it. lol

I see.

I like it a whole fuckin' lot. It's industrial, ambient and XP all at once. The ending was a little.. Too sudden? I think there may have been a better way to end the song. It reminds me of a couple of my old songs and a little bit of the Trans Siberian orchestra.

I see a quickly passing ice covered landscape. Many pictures of frozen structures hit me as I speed by them. Jagged, powder covered structures of ice that seem as though they could uproot themselves and dance the delicate ways of a ballerina. Beyond them is a seemingly flat landscape, frostbitten and clean.

This is without my good headphones on and coming out of computer speakers but I think it's orchestrated quite well. Didn't have too many problems with it, myself. Although I do feel like you are holding back here. Wrong? Right? Who knows?

Kirbyfemur responds:

Lol the ending was that way because of the 4 minute limit, and because I had gotten to that part of the song and just was like, "you know what? I'm just going to leave it like this for now until the competition is over."

So that issue will be adressed later, I am glad that someone likes it :3

It seems that...

This is pretty ok, contrary to what I thought it was going to be. Now there were problems with it though, like the choir VST or w/e you kids call them was too quiet. The other major problem would be a sudden ending. Do you have the official soundtrack? All the songs loop but they fade out at the end of them on the OST.

I suggest tweaking it a little bit and then re-uploading it but hey, that's just me and I'm an immense fan of the music from Final Fantasy 7. Good work!

DesoloZ responds:

no no no thank u i need to know this thank you :D

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